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Ch. 55: FragmentsFragments  '...solving an impossible puzzle...'   
 Instantaneous. That was the only word to describe Bartholomew's death. One moment Judith, Jack and Austin were in the fight of their lives, the next, it was all over. A single incredible gust of wind and the deep whooshing noise of something massive passing through air quicker then it should be capable of as a golden spear split the fabric of time and space penetrating a fully awakened demon, killing it in a single almighty blow. The closed space that had been formed because of the demonic presence disappeared with its death and soon townsfolk young and old, male and fema Ch. 55: Fragments
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Ch. 54: BartholomewBartholomew  '...son of Tolmay...'   
 All Rinslet could do was gape as Austin and Bart stared at one another, daring the other to make the first move. She had read about something like this before in a book from a far eastern country. It was about samurai as she recalled, and it was said that when two masters confronted one another the encounter would last only a second once action took place. Maybe this was something of that nature? As time dragged on, and only the movement of Bart's face trying to reconstruct itself made any noise or animation, Rinslet felt her knees weaken. It was as if the air around her had gotten he Ch. 54: Bartholomew
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Ch. 53: PerspectivePerspective  '...one sided mirror...'   
 Sara, Emelia and Judith first went to locate the bank upon leaving Spring's Awakening. Emelia felt they would certainly need some money if they were to get anything done in town. Both girls held their respective luggage while Judith managed with everyone else's clothes, doing so with such awkwardness that many townsfolk watched the trio with a certain amount of amusement. Emelia noted passing a bank at one point during their travels about town the day before but she couldn't place where it was exactly which led to a lot of wandering around to Judith's disgust. During their quest, E Ch. 53: Perspective
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Ch. 52: Will'Will'  'to live...to die...to fight...'   
 A light double tap on Rinslet's door had her on her feet and stumbling over. She had finally fallen asleep and was certainly not in the mood for any intrusions, unless it was...   She opened the door and was a little disappointed to find O'Brian on the other side. She knew by the way he had knocked that it wasn't who she was hoping for but still...   'Hey there. You stayin' all alone by yourself here? You should get some fresh air you know. It's a beautiful day out there and it'd be a waste to spend it in here.'   Rinslet watched the man talk with s Ch. 52: Will
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The End is Nigh

Tue Nov 17, 2009, 2:41 PM
so book one of Haystacked Cradle is drawing to its close soon. I'd say about 5 more chapters, MAYBE more but i don't think so, maybe not even 5 chapters who knows? i guess i should...^^;

anyway, the point of this is that i'm going to be slowly reviewing all the chapters soon (i've already semi-started to correct grammer, plot holes and stuff like that. but my question/request here for those of you who have been really helping me along (razi and kare-chan haha!) is whether or not you have any suggestions to make the series better, or improve some things? Like...what am i doing right, what could be fixed, what are some thoughts or concerns you have about certain things, events, or characters? absolutely anything would be really really appreciated as i'm approaching finishing my first ever novel.

as always and i can't stress this enough, thanks so much for the support! it really is what keeps me going when it comes down to it. or at least, keeps my working on this consistent.

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  • Reading: Haystcaked Cradle...duh...
  • Watching: Chrome Shelled Regios
  • Playing: persona 3:fes
  • Eating: cinna-buns i wish
  • Drinking: propel

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=7Sinns Oct 22, 2009, 3:43:52 PM
Aaaaa~ thanks for the watch!!! heeeeeeeee~

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I get excited over Soap on a rope

"Fuck you man, my mother played that game for recreational puposes, your mother did it to buy you some mother fucking socks!"
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~himuramatsu Oct 23, 2009, 9:31:51 AM
i figured i'd use this account for commenting on your story just for fun hahah!
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=7Sinns Oct 14, 2009, 1:48:23 AM
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DURRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR...:)

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I get excited over Soap on a rope

"Fuck you man, my mother played that game for recreational puposes, your mother did it to buy you some mother fucking socks!"
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=7Sinns Oct 1, 2009, 9:46:19 AM
Oh noes! D: too late I went and did it

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I get excited over Soap on a rope

"Fuck you man, my mother played that game for recreational puposes, your mother did it to buy you some mother fucking socks!"
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~himuramatsu Oct 2, 2009, 3:44:29 PM
has it been that long since i checked this?? ughh....but you did an amazing job with it! the heart looks cool! it's a nice addition and really made me feel the love. :D
thanks as always for being so dern supportive you!
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=7Sinns Oct 1, 2009, 5:31:49 AM
I wants to make a stamp for Haystacked....but I'm not sure what image or font I should uuuuuuse.....any prefs?

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I get excited over Soap on a rope

"Fuck you man, my mother played that game for recreational puposes, your mother did it to buy you some mother fucking socks!"
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Mood: Joy ~sunflower-2020 Sep 22, 2009, 4:56:00 PM
hey what is your favorite flyleaf song? i love their band^^

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~Don't let your mind rule over your heart~
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~himuramatsu Sep 22, 2009, 7:19:21 PM
it's between sorrow and there for you. prolly sorrow.
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~sunflower-2020 Sep 23, 2009, 3:32:40 PM
mine is sorrow and fully alive^^

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~Don't let your mind rule over your heart~
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=7Sinns Aug 7, 2009, 3:54:48 PM
Reeeeeagghh...................................
DAMMIT!
(crosses arms) I'm so disappointed in myself. Of course it's been there in front of me for bleeding AGES!
I guess I never really put too much thought into it because he only appears periodically but still.

Jacky Jacky, got his head in a sacky, poor Jacky Jacky's got a demon on his backy...

Ryoko: Poor ol Jacky Jacky he gonna end up on cracky! :lmao:

All my fandoms and my own devils and demons having their own bodies on earth threw me off, but in the bible it's always a demon possessing someone....grr stupid stupid Raziel.

That really excites my imagination thooooooooo....rawr....evil possessed Jack doing evil things! Oh the fun.

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I get excited over Soap on a rope

"Fuck you man, my mother played that game for recreational puposes, your mother did it to buy you some mother fucking socks!"
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